dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 8, 2006 10:34:25 GMT -5
You approach this huge cave, with a carcass and a skeleton lying outside. you have been sent here by the king himself, many a people, mainly soldiers using this route as a short cut to reach lake osirin fasterm have never been seen again. a huge loss in the ranks, when Sir Ryblor dissapeared, you have been sent to investigate and if possible recover Sir Ryblor.you are escorted by the king's very best, it seems tales of your heroic escapades has not gone unnoticed, as you were heading for the cave people bowed down low to you, some came up running to you, sorrow in their eyes telling you to rid them of this evil.you are escorted by 5 fire arrowed crossbow men, 5 soldier wearing heavy armour holding longswords and kite shields. and finally you are escorted by a general HERself, it was a great honour for anyone to be serving under,Lady Crisa(the general).The cave has a very bad odour , you have a very bad feeling about this , do you accept?{maximum 3 people, no exceptions}
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inthedark
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Post by inthedark on Mar 8, 2006 14:53:51 GMT -5
Accept:
Alsdair muttered something about serving under a woman, but wars were scarce nowadays and he had bills to pay. So he silently rode along, looking everybit the knight he was.
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Marr
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Post by Marr on Mar 9, 2006 4:06:19 GMT -5
from almost nowhere a man dressed in all black steps up to Lady crisa and says "my name is Marr.....ive heard about your mission and have come to help you"
((whats it the woman general???))
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dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 9, 2006 4:15:29 GMT -5
Crisa signals you to join the ranks, as you enter the cave, an obnoxious smell of rotting flesh nearly makes you pass out, as you progress you start to feel better. a you enter the cave you see a reflection of yourself in the huge lake with pitch black water in front fo you, there are two canoes toed to a corner. there is nothing but water in front of you, and your only hope of reaching the other side is useing the canoes. you have a dread of the canoes, as the water lets you see nothing ahead, you hear a distinct cry on the other side a sort of screech wot do u do?
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Marr
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Post by Marr on Mar 9, 2006 4:19:56 GMT -5
i grow wings and start moving across the lake.....i tell the troops and the general to follow me..... i do not trust the boats.
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dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 9, 2006 4:42:50 GMT -5
Crisa is obviously not used to take orders and shouts out,"get down here at once, then she tells on of the heavy armed soldiers to secure the boats and to board them. she then signals 3 crossbowmen, and 3 soldiers will go in one boat while she, alsdair, 2 crossbowmen and 2 soldiers board the other boat as they follow marr.
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Post by Arvind Pillai on Mar 9, 2006 5:51:18 GMT -5
"i grow wings and start moving across the lake.....i tell the troops and the general to follow me..... i do not trust the boats."
1) Dont talk in first person (I, me etc.)
2) Use a single fullstop not three.
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dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 9, 2006 5:53:45 GMT -5
(lol)
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inthedark
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Post by inthedark on Mar 9, 2006 13:27:16 GMT -5
Alsdair shrugs but does as intstructed, no point in getting in a fight with potentiol allies...
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dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 9, 2006 14:51:30 GMT -5
you board the canoes, and as you move on, s new type of smeel grows stronger, it is extremely sweet and after a while starts to irritate your nose. as marr hovers behind you, you hear this deafening screech ahout for help and a splash behind you, Crisa keeping her calm shouts out behind you,"no one shoots till i say so one of our friend has already dissapeared due to his rash actions. now will two of you volunteer to go doown there?" as reality strikes you, alsdair turns around to see that marr was no where to be seen. a tall man steps up and sayu,"i , private gibor shall volunteer, ma'am!" with this the crowd falls silent, Crisa speaks,"this is no good, we will have to carry on, one person can not go alone." alsdair would u volunteer or continue your journey instead??? marr:- as you are pulled down by the thing's tentacle, you feel one of your wings being bent badly and then with the impact with the water, a strange chemical reaction, seems to dissolve your wings entirelly, you take a deep gulp of the slimy liquid and as the thing pulls u down deeper u realise, u can breathe in the water, the water surprisingly clear unlike the surface, gives you a clear view of your surroundings, tiger sharks swim around but do not notice you, you look down and take a glance at the thing, you are able to see its menacing red eyes and feel the water warm around you. you see blodd in the water, and notice it is the wound of the wing. the creature binds its tentacle around you, squeezing, deliberately the wound, blood oozes out, you faint the very instant. and as you do you see a strange image registered in your mind, it flashes before you for an instant but seems to be registered in your brain, as if too be triggered by a certain thought, then u loose consciousness. the image was:-
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inthedark
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Post by inthedark on Mar 9, 2006 16:14:37 GMT -5
- Well, the honorable thing to do would be to try to help him, but we must be realistic. I do not posses the ability to breath underwater. Maybe you do but i can saftly say I do not.
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dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 10, 2006 1:51:03 GMT -5
((PS- I am telliong both of your stories seperatelyy till you reunite, or not, i have labelled each ones story seperately..........)) alsdair:- Crisa looks shoked, howevever she covers it up quickly replying,"yes, you would obviously have to hold your breath under water however, if you would not want to save a fellow comrade, alsdair then i will go down myself, with this gibor and lady crisa take a plunge into the water, you wait for them, they do not appear for around half of an hour, you get worried then two heads pop out, neither of marr's. as crisa and gibor board the ship they look att you smiling and say,"i don't know how but when we went down, the water was crystal clear, you could see for a mile around you." on eof the crossbow men says,"how did you mangae to hold your breath my lady?" crisa looks surprised,"hold our breath? what do you mean hod our breath, we were just under water... oh my god, we were breathing all the time. well im tired but gibor here will go down yet again, alsdair will you accompany him or shall we movee along?" marr:- as you regain consciousnes you see the image again, then you see a tenacle of the thing which was binding you, you catch a complete image of the beast, you are terrified, then as the thing moves, you are unable to see anything but shadows, you see this huge figure's shadow, and the creature binding you with a flash dissapears. the creature that captured you was:- now what do you do, you are fully conscious with life 4/5.?
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inthedark
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Post by inthedark on Mar 10, 2006 11:19:17 GMT -5
Alsdair looks quistioningly at the two before decides to check the water himself. - Alright, if were to go, than let us go.'
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dgurushesh
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Post by dgurushesh on Mar 11, 2006 8:37:06 GMT -5
alsdair: as you enter the water, you and gibor head deeper, crisa shouts something like,"dont..... swallow.............. water,..........slimy." but it is inaudible by the time she finishes it, you both take a huge gulp of the water and proceed downwards, you see it is easy to see and to breathe, you swim aroun till you stop to rest on this huge piece of coral, do you decide to explore it or do you continue?
marr: after having seen the creature you decide to head upwards but then again you see the colossal shadow of the creature that was able to defeat the monster that had bound you, you are scared to encounter the creature, do you proceed or stay back?
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Marr
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Post by Marr on Mar 11, 2006 8:38:37 GMT -5
((hey-nice pic)) i use my knowledge of marranghana to remove his brains and exchange them with some slimy,gooey algae at the bottom of the lake
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